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Yeah I wrote this thing about coming out I wanna know if you guys like it don’t read it if ya don’t want to tho

Yeah I wrote this thing about coming out I wanna know if you guys like it don’t read it if ya don’t want to tho

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Business_Witness5475

It’s phenomenal honestly, one hell of a banger and has really impactful lyrics, keep up at it!


plbrhajvrv

Thank you, as one insecure motherfucker I really appreciate the support


Business_Witness5475

No problem your the one who did the good work


confused_screaming__

This is amazing, it’s so powerful and relatable, thank you for sharing it!


ouiouiouiouiouiyes

The lyrics are really thoughtful and the message is clear and super relatable for a lot of people, especially us in this particular sub. One suggestion I have is making sure that the syllables in each rhyming line stay consistent with the next one. Adding words or getting rid of them helps or even using synonyms works too. Overall, amazing work and I hope you make more :D


plbrhajvrv

Yeah I kinda just wrote this as more of a rant than a full proper like attempt like just kinda wrote the first rhyming lines that came into my head so I didn’t do thing like with the syllables bc idk just wasnt trying to


ouiouiouiouiouiyes

I mean it’s super good and turning it into a song beyond just lyrics would be really fucking cool


plbrhajvrv

I agree but also I can’t sing and idk how to produce so like


Epiphany818

The fourth verse (or paragraph in not sure what to call it) really hits home. Awesome job, made my eyes wet lol